Đề IELTS writing ngày hôm nay 02/08/14

Đề IELTS writing ngày hôm nay 02/08/14 nhé các em: 

Task 1 là 2 cái bar charts so sánh về tỷ lệ lao động ở Mỹ, Nhật, Đức và Trung Quốc trong các sectors là Agriculture và Services.

Task 2 : In many parts of the world, children and teenagers are commiting more crimes. Why is this happening? How should they be punished?

Đề task 2 này cô Thùy dạy các lớp trong chuyên đề “Juvenile delinquency”, em nào thi chỉ có trúng tủ trở lên nhé, mà ko làm được thì đáng úp mặt xuống gối :V

Mà thôi, đã post thì đành mò lại cho các em, đây nhé (BÀI THAM KHẢO):

There is no doubt that, almost every good and bad field has developed significantly over the past few decades and it is too visiable in behaviour and actions of young people. As many people have mentioned that, in many cities around the globe rates of crime by teenagers are increasing unexpectedly. The goverment as well as parents are trying to find solution for this international problem. Many people believe that, wisely chosen punishment is the best way to control the number of crimes in society. While, some of them believe that, it is not the only way to reduce the level of crime. They think that, there must be another way.

First of all, no one can deny that, according to the recent figures, there is an increase in violent, robber and even murder crimes among young people. As many scientists have claimed that,the main reason for this is that, nowadays, youth are growing with lack of pay attention by their parents but also teachers. Moreover, children are not getting social and emotional knowledge at their schools.

Second of all, action movies with murder, robber are being popular amongst youth. It is clearly seen that, these sort of movies lead to an increase crime among teenagers as they try to copy what they have seen in the movies. Futhermore, films have an important influence on young people who are influenced both by what they watch and hear.

Third of all, nowadays, no one does amaze, when read on newspapers and watch on the television about in most societies over the planet the number of crime is rising unexpectedly. In fact that, youth are breaking laws especially rights of people with way of violence.

From my point of view, the best way to control as well as reduce the number of crime is replace severe punishments than panleties are such as, financial and and even being in prison. Moreover, lack of social and emotional knowledge is one of the main factor to increase crime among youth due to the government should more pay attention to both education and law systems.

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